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Magikoopa Myster

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Posted on 05-22-05 10:30 PM Link | Quote
...is a comic that I made about those ukikis from Yoshi's Island! Here's the first one I made:

Well?
Valcion Kaizer

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Posted on 05-22-05 10:44 PM Link | Quote
You're the reason why sprite comics should be outlawed.
Yoshi Dude

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Posted on 05-22-05 10:53 PM Link | Quote
This is bad.
Not the sort of bad where someone could take this comic and point out everything wrong with it, so that other sprite comic artists can avoid these mistakes, and perhaps get a little chuckle.
It's just bad.

The best advice I can give is that you should come up with material before getting started on a comic.
Sukasa

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Posted on 05-22-05 11:16 PM Link | Quote
I guess I have no eye for art, because I think it's kinda funny. Besides, it's koopa's first. Just give him time and he'll be great.
JDavis

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Posted on 05-23-05 01:46 AM Link | Quote
I liked it too... But then, I am quite parital to Ukiki.

Still, I've got to point out that the Ukiki do not appear to be walking (because they don't walk, they either hop or run, only doing the latter when carrying something), and something needs to be done about the barely readable "SQUISH", the invisible fruit, and Whispy Wood's arms... which make me cry.
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Posted on 05-23-05 07:11 AM Link | Quote
You owe me the 596.72 dollars it took me for the eye surgery I had to have after the viewing of this caused my retinas to burst into flames.
Magikoopa Myster

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Posted on 05-23-05 08:02 AM Link | Quote
Ok, ok, it sucks noodles. But it's my first try! It'll get better, I promise. Oh, this was made on paint, so it has it's limits.
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Posted on 05-23-05 09:43 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Koopa Myster
Ok, ok, it sucks noodles. But it's my first try! It'll get better, I promise. Oh, this was made on paint, so it has it's limits.


You owe us then.

On a side-note, you have a great attitude about it. And if you stick with it, you'll definitely get results.
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Posted on 05-23-05 10:07 PM Link | Quote
He shown me a couple more, and I must admit, they're good!

Advice: Get PSP! (Paint Shop Pro )
Peardian

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Posted on 05-24-05 02:46 AM Link | Quote
It's okay, but the story is kinda hard to follow. You can't see the tree or the fruit in the first frame. The BG's cool, though. KDL3 had great backgrounds.

Paint is good by itself, but Jasc will definately help.
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