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Peardian
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That looks better! I like the background. |
Prier
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That's much better yea, although the gradient between the mountains and whereever looks like it could be fixed a bit. Looks like it's a bit too sharp when it merges with the ceiling blocks. |
Bit-Blade
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Mock up two. This looks much better but I still need to fix some things. Overall and big improvement. |
JDavis
Posts: 402/815 |
It's one image, but Rain pretty well hit it. The 'tile' that consists of the bricks going from the normal lighting to dark isn't tiling properly with the normal bricks under the first two steps. It's fine on the third step, though. |
Prier
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Originally posted by Bit-Blade Could you explain that a little better please? Telling me it looks bad and not really explaining why isn't goign to help me
Take a look at the bottom of the steps on the stairs in the second picture. Notice that the path of bricks leading up into the stairs (that is, under the walk-path) doesn't merge well? This is for each step too, I notice, except for maybe the top step.
But otherwise, they aren't bad, although the moon in the first picture looks like an odd form of an eclipse more than a moon. |
Bit-Blade
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Could you explain that a little better please? Telling me it looks bad and not really explaining why isn't goign to help me |
JDavis
Posts: 393/815 |
Make the bricks tile better. Look at the bottom of the stair/whatever where they're getting darker. Horrible. |
Bit-Blade
Posts: 147/445 |
The moon. The stars will also be black. I figure something like that will look creepy. |
Peardian
Posts: 244/1696 |
Looks good. What's the floating black sphere? |
Bit-Blade
Posts: 146/445 |
I'm working on a level tileset and this is what I have so far. I'm not sure what else this set needs but I could use some personal input on that. My ideas are as follows
Chadeliers Windows Stained glass windows? (not liking that one) Vines some other misc plant Statues? Torches Water Those stereotypical inexplicably floating platforms that all 2d sidescrollers have. In this case, I think something golden would go well. |